When I was lost, you helped me find my way
without a request, or promise to obey
When I was sick, you brought me back to health
then showed me all of my life’s wealth.
When I was sad, you held my hand for joy to appear
growing more towards you with revere.
When I gave up hope, you led me to your heart
where I knew it was a new start.
When I needed help, it was you who encouraged me
to learn to thrive and feel nothing but free.
When I was successful, I knew you played a role
always helping me to become whole.
Through virtue and sin, you walked with me all the time
‘til one day I hope to have achieved the climb.
God, thank you for loyalty, you’ve been a best friend,
which I hope to see when I come upon the end.
Hey Tot! I do love this poem! It's nice to see it here. I haven't put up anything like this on mine yet. Still too shy.
ReplyDeleteBelieve has a great rhythm full of hope, and has a gentle feel to it.
Well done!
Hinny :D (from The Block, just in case you're wondering who I am. :P)
Hey Hinny, LOL! I know who you are.
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my poem and I'm glad you like it. In time, I hope to read some of yours.
*heads over to Hinny's place*
Dear Bea,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this piece. Quite inspirational and true. Thanks!!
I appreciate it, Veejay. I enjoy getting feedback on my writing, good or bad. All suggestions help.
ReplyDeleteTake care.