Thursday, September 19, 2013

Let Me Pick Your Brain!

Hello Everyone,

I am currently working on a women's fiction - chick lit novel, and I do not like the working title. I'd like to get your input.

If you have time, please read the brief synopsis below, and place your vote above. Any and all comments appreciated.

Brand Rye’s life has come to a halt. She’s lost everything—even her memory. After spending time in the hospital, Brand returns home to a husband she doesn’t remember, and a life that has disappeared overnight. Her husband, Easton, provides Brand with bits and pieces of her past while she tries to put it all together.

Brand starts to realize that she isn’t the person she thinks she is ... or is she?

Alcohol and loss are what brought Easton and Brand together. Once out of rehab, Easton offers Brand a place to stay for a price. With nothing left to lose but her sarcasm, Brand takes him up on his offer, which begins a whirlwind of adventure and sexual tension.

I thank you in advance for your time.

Denise Baer


  1. This story sounds very mysterious and emotional, but the synopsis is a little confusing to me. After you ask the question about whether Brand is who she thinks she is, it seems another story line starts up. Was it alcohol and loss that brought them together before or after she lost her memory..."offers Brand a place ti stay for a price," is a keeper. I really want to know what's going on here.
    Hope this was helpful. Good luck.

    1. Thanks, ECS. I appreciate your comments and I'll definitely take another look at the synopsis.

  2. I cast my vote for Untangle Me.

  3. I voted for Untangle Me, but as a sucker for catchy rhymes, I also rather like Goodbye, Brand Rye. It's fun to say and feels a little more unique than the others you've listed.

    I love me some chick lit! Congrats on finishing your draft!

    1. Hey Barb, Good to see you. I agree about the catchy title. Thanks for taking the time to vote.

  4. Thank you all for your time and responses. I appreciate it.